9.10.04

mood: morose

music: 'blue in green' by miles davis

my first completed song:

Kristy Evans



Red
Free
Strawberry
Tell me.
Why
Can't you see?

Lost
Key
Lunacy
Melt me.
Life
Is less than
Free.

Angry
Happily
Kill me.
Disconnect me.

Red
Free
Strawberry
Love me.
Why
Can't you love
Me?


---Goei---

3 comments:

Heather Meadows said...

I'd have to have the chord progression to tell if it's a good song, but I like the lyrics :)

B Goei said...

thanks ^_^

and the chord progression is kinda weird. i'm into the whole shoegazer britpop thing, so i've got a few self-fabricated chords in there. basically it's:

A A/Gb D Db Ab/E Gb D Db E

A F#m D E

and that goes around a few times. if you can understand that, i'd be amazed, because i spent a good amount of time sitting here and making some of those notations up.

Heather Meadows said...

Scarily, I think I understand what you're doing. Now, if only I was so musically talented that I could hear those in my head!

I need to get a keyboard or something. I have no musical instruments in this apartment except for my husband's saxophone.

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